Ugh! Why the Resume You Just Perfected and Crossed Off Your “To 
Do” List May Need One More Look…

Nancy Mackevich Glazer is Manager of Legal Launch, LLC. The mission of Legal Launch is to give uplifting and creative career advice to 3Ls, recent law school grads and experienced attorneys. Nancy helps her clients land gratifying employment – legal or nonlegal - in a competitive market.

My name is Nancy Glazer. I have been helping law students and recent grads find jobs in law for 27 years, although this is my first contribution to the Chicago Law Bulletin’s blog, Attorneys in Transition.  

As I’m new around here, you might expect me to write an uplifting piece about how great your chances are to land the job of your dreams. My clients know, “uplifting” is what I typically do best, making their job searches exciting, “upbeat” even.

What I’d like to do with this introductory writing is give you something of value that will actually improve your resume and help get you an interview. My suggestions always require more work on your part. (That’s where the “ugh!” comes in …)

I know you have finally crossed off the “Revise resume” entry from your lengthy “to do” list. Here I am, new kid on the block, saying, “Take another look!” (I know, too, that you’ve revised your resume nearly 100 times and that you just can’t even look at it any more without getting 
dizzy …) 

Okay.  Let’s check to see if your resume is cutting-edge:

1. Does your resume add value or “quantify” what work you performed for a past employer or client? A cutting-edge resume for 2014 helps a prospective employer see in real numbers how your past work was valued. For example, if you have worked in-house for an insurance company, your resume might say:  

“Creatively helped resolve a multi-party lawsuit.”  

Checking Out the Resume - Part I
Here are some pointers for a knock-out resume for 2014 ...
This article first appeared in the Law Bulletin Publishing Company's The Chicago Daily Law Bulletin, in the related blog, Attorneys in Transition, and the web site of Ms. JD,
This entry is just okay.  To add intrigue and show a future employer how you are even more valuable, consider changing the entry to read:

“Saved company $200,000 in legal fees by assessing each party's common needs and  interests, helping to forge better understanding and settlement of claims in coverage lawsuit."  

By adding more detail (provided you can remember the resulting successes you actually had), you have now demonstrated your mediation skills and quantified the value of your work. Everyone is looking to save money; this entry now demonstrated hits a chord with the reader.

In addition, you have now described to a hiring attorney that you handled a specific kind of case regarding a coverage issue and that that it was complex. These details, especially the cost savings, help a prospective employer see that you are the one he wants to hire.

2. If you are a law student with some work experience, on your resume, did you indicate that you observed trials or depositions? If the answer to this question is “yes,” know this: the attorneys reading your resume or sitting on the other side of the desk from you don’t really care that you watched courtroom action. While seeing trials and depositions may have been quite exciting for you, if you worked for a judge or for litigators, this experience is simply assumed.  

If you are fighting for room in every line of your resume, this is where to cut in this section. If you must include the phrase about your talents “observing” in any part of your resume, try to bury it, perhaps in the middle of the section or at the end.  

If these strategies were helpful to you, watch for Part II of this blog next week. That entry will discuss how you describe your experience writing motions and briefs in your resume.


Nancy Glazer practiced litigation in a large Chicago law firm, served as the Legal Director for a legal clinic for people with disabilities, and arbitrates matters for the State of Illinois. She now dedicates her time to helping 3Ls, recent grads and experienced attorneys land legal and nonlegal positions in a competitive market. 


I rewrote my resume following your advice. 

I am happy to say that my resume was very well received, and I just accepted an offer with a mid-size patent law firm specializing in both patent prosecution and litigation. 

Thank you for your help!"

   - N.B., a 2012 law          school graduate